网上使用的伪原创翻译:On May 24th, Shenzhen held the launching ceremony of their 3000-ton Sea Law Enforcement Vessel construction project for safeguarding China's maritime rights and interests. The vessel has successfully hit the water, indicating the final phase of the project, and is scheduled to be finished and delivered this October. The construction project is supported by the Shenzhen Municipal Government, led by the Municipal Planning and Natural Resources Bureau, and managed by the Municipal Marine Comprehensive Law Enforcement Support Team. The China Shipbuilding Industry Corporation's 701st Research Institute and the China State Shipbuilding Corporation Huangpu Wenchong Shipbuilding Company were responsible for the design and construction of the vessel. (Shenzhen News)
评价:该伪原创在汉语翻译上与原版文本十分相似,然而在英文翻译上使用了更简短的句式和词汇,这使得该翻译更易于理解;但是,这样的修改可能会使得翻译过程中不可避免地出现某些译文的偏差或缺失。此外,伪原创使用了新闻稿的依赖性较强的语言,这意味着可以直接从原始来源中获得大部分词汇和短语。